The title, brief description and genres work for the poem. Maybe you could add 'Parenting' as a further genre.
I like the rhyme scheme and verse structure. You've brought out various aspects of a good man, a hero to you. The emotions are well evoked. As you've mentioned, anyone who feels this way about their Dad can relate to your poem.
SUGGESTIONS:
1. WritingML - font, size, line-space, center.
2. First verse, second line: 'Dad's' doesn't need an apostrophe, since it is plural.
3. The verse starting 'And 45' confused me a bit. Do you mean that as a father, you look to the advice your Dad once gave you while raising your own children? I'm not quite sure how to interpret that verse.
4. In the verse about having a way with words, you suddenly speak in second person. While this is fine, I did wonder if sticking to it from a son's point of view would make it more powerful.
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