Hi, JCosmos , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Invalid Item"  because I discovered it on the "Promptly Poetry Challenge (2024-2025)"  forum page.

First Thoughts: The poem follows the free verse form and looks good on the page. The rhythm moves the narrative and emotions of sadness forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: This is my favorite line, It is one of the hardest thing. I like this line because it states a fact.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this poem because of the subject.








My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .