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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi, AmyJo-2025 refund, please! Author Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I'm reviewing "Promptly Poetry Challenge 2022/2023" Open in new Window. "Time" Open in new Window. because I discovered it on the "Promptly Poetry Challenge (2024-2025)" Open in new Window. forum page.

First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the form, mood, and theme of the poem. The rhythm moves the narrative and emotions forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the way the words relentlessly and marches are repeated in the first and last stanzas because they emphasize the theme of the poem.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this poem because of the subject.

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