Hi, BK Compton, adopted by cats , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "The Absence of Wavelength and Sight"  "Invalid Entry"  because I discovered it on the "Promptly Poetry Challenge (2024-2025)"  forum page.

First Thoughts: The couplet form fits the theme and emotions of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words move the narrative and emotions forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems. I don't think it need any more punctuation than it already has.

My favorite part: The last stanza is my favorite because it closes the poem on a meditative note.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this poem because of the way it expressed spiritual emotions.








My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .