Quite the pun with the title. It gave me a chuckle.
My First Impression
The use of great dialogue. Was a smooth read. I was anxious to read the theory of what art really is. There it was in a Google search!!
Characters
You have two main characters here that are like ying and yang. Not sure how they remained friends to be honest. I say this with a giggle. Art is being the one who sees nothing artful about the red dot, and Jeryl reads into the piece in great length.
Imagery
Even though this was all dialogue. It set an image and mood for me as I read on. The setting was clear and it held a humorous tone. I could see Art twisting his head, still trying to see what his friend did in the red dot. Moving on to the next piece this seems to be quite the day for both.
Over All Thoughts
Thanks so much for sharing!! I am glad I took a peek and had a great chuckle. A nice light story! Good luck and Keep writing!!
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