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 nostalgia (august 13, 1989, the beach)  Open in new Window. [E]
Inspired by ‘august’ by Taylor Swift. Nostalgia of being with someone you love.
by olivia Author Icon
Review by 👼intuey Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi Olivia. Welcome to WDC (writing.com). If I can be of help in any way, please don't hesitate to contact me. *Heart*

I enjoyed your poem about new love. Hoping and feeling it's a love that will surpass just a summer infatuation.

I like the analogies you used with your feelings and the beach. Being born and raised a Florida girl, it was definitely relatable. *Delight*

*Reading* My favorite lines:

like Polaroids hung on string with wooden pegs

the Polaroids slip from the pegs
will you catch them

A good and strong ending.

I look forward to you sharing more of your writing with us. *Bigsmile*

Thanks so much!

Write On!
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