Hi, Madelyn Gobble Gobble Stone , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Journal/Blog"  "07-03-23 Personal Essay Contest Entry" , because I discovered it on the "Twenty-three in Eleven "  forum page.

First Impression: The first sentence of this essay hooked. The author moves the narrative forward at a good pace, while giving logical and proven reason why vinegar is her enemy.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: This is my favorite sentence, Sometimes, we cannot have our vinegar and eat it, too. I like this sentence because it made me smile.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this well-written essay because it was about vinegar.