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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Happy Anniversary! I enjoyed reading your story. My granddaughter would really enjoy it. *Smile*

I hope this review finds you well and filled with creativity.

What an adorable children's story. It's one easily relatable to past history, or even a valuable lesson on how to treat others right here at home.

You did a wonderful job with the imagery and enabled the reader to be right there with the white rabbit. The relationship formed, first by empathy toward the rabbit, and by the boy, is nicely portrayed and sets the scene to come.

It's a simple lesson: We all need to take care of one another. Don't be greedy and keep those that were here before and after us in our mind.

Thank you so much for sharing your writing with us.

Write On! *Heart*
Intuey
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