Wow! It's been a while. I hope you've been doing well.
Your title and description pulled me in. I knew with it being the horror genre, the description was more than likely, sarcastic.
You have a strong beginning which made me want to read on! I really enjoyed the twist in the middle. I knew something was going to happen, but I wasn't expecting that. Nice job!
The ending tied up this short, short story nicely. You truly did a good job writing a complete story in just a few words.
I didn't notice any errors. Thank you so much for sharing your writing with us!
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