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 Not All Human, Chapter 3 Open in new Window. [13+]
Troy' condition worsens as Victor prepares for the next day...
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Glad to see you're back with the next episode.

This is taking an alarming turn. I'm at the edge of my seat. Your writing is grim and unsettling and leaves me wondering how the central conflict could possibly be resolved in a satisfactory way. It seems as if someone's going to be killed rather unpleasantly if this doesn't stop soon.

Thanks for sharing and keep on writing. It's definitely something I'll want to keep up with *Smile*

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