Good work here. I love the little pun on "morning" and "mourning" at the beginning; at first I was going to point it out as a mistake but that's silly, of course you know what you're doing there

It's clever that each verse begins with a mention of time, but the time is not linear; it begins with two weeks and then moves to ten days before extending further.

Thanks for sharing, this is a nice poem that paints a picture in few words. Keep writing and congratulations on your Quill nomination



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