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What the Darkness Brings Open in new Window. [E]
It's only in your mind, right?
by AmyJo-Spring's finally here! Author Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi, AmyJo-Spring's finally here! Author IconMail Icon, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "What the Darkness BringsOpen in new Window., because I discovered it on the "Twenty-three in Eleven Open in new Window. forum page.

First Impression: The first stanza establishes to form, mood, plot, and theme of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the narrative and plot forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The last stanza is my favorite because it climaxes the plot of the poem.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this inspiring poem because of its theme.

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