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Review #4710272
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 Trouble Me Open in new Window. [13+]
Be truly one with me.
by Ophelia Mae Hancock Author Icon
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Review by 👼intuey Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hello Ophelia Mae Hancock Author Icon Happy WDC 23ed Birthday! This is a review on behalf of "Angel Review Forum" Open in new Window. [ASR] This is only my views. Please use or discard as you're comfortable with. *Smile*


*Reading* Wow. Passionate and deep. I enjoyed it. Reread a few times, and each time, I still stopped and reflected on some of your lines. Nicely done!

*Balloon2* Title and Description - Great title. It caught my attention and drew me in. Your description made me want to read on!

*Penr* Theme/Subject Matter:- How close can two people truly get/be. Reading these words shows you that this author wants to become one with her one-and-only.

*Penb*Originality/Creativity:- Very original and creative. You truly have some great lines and stanzas.

*Flower3*Emotion/Impact: - You left me with envying the love you have for your other half. I remember the feeling. It's intoxicating. It left a peaceful and reflective emotional impact on this reader. *Smile*

*Balloon4* My Suggestions - I only have a few very minor suggestions. Please use them or discard them as you see fit.

*Books2* circutious

circuitous

*Penb* figure eight

figure-eight

*Reading* maypole

Capitalize Maypole

*Bookstack* meandor

meander

*Penv*My Favorite Part: -

Tickle me with your brush of crimson
Soothe me with your blessing of violet
Highlight me with a touch of sterling
Then growl and bring it all to life

So beautiful! Great choice of words. *Heart*

*Peng*Summary: I really enjoyed reading this writing. I look forward to reading it again in the near future. (That's a HUGE compliment). I know it'll touch me just the same the next time around. Thank you so much for sharing it with us.

*Quill* KEEP ON WRITING ON! *Quill*

*Heart* Intuey

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