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 Review #4710528 |
 | The Situation of A Song  [13+] She has sung in the sun in the city of blues  |
| (4.0)| Hello Vistadream Happy 23rd WDC Birthday! This is a review on behalf of "Angel Review Forum" [ASR] This is only my views. Please use or discard as you're comfortable with.   A nice little prose of a man listening to and adoring his one true love. He gave her a ring and enjoyed the happiness and song it brought to her lips. Title and Description - Interesting title choice. After one reads the piece, the title makes sense. It did catch my attention, and the catchy description urged me to read on. Theme/Subject Matter:- The happiness a marriage propsol brings both partners. It makes one sing, and the other enjoys watching and listening to her sing. Originality/Creativity:- A good spin of originality on a common subject. I thought the viewpoint you used was quite creative. Nice job! Emotion/Impact: - I felt the love he had for her, and she for him. The piece left me with a smile. The world would be a happier place if all could find such love. My Suggestions - I only have a very few minor suggestions. Please use or discard them as you see fit. shimmering of loveshimmering with love  I cry of these bluesI cry from these blues  20 karat20-Karat I sing la la laI sing La, la, la  My Favorite Part: -Meaningful song from aboveWith a windy smile shimmering of love In the sun drawing the doves Summary: Thank you for sharing your prose with us. I enjoyed it. KEEP ON WRITING ON!  Intuey   My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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You responded to this review 02/25/2024 @ 7:55am EST