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A Father’s Lament Open in new Window. [E]
Oh, there is the garden, I wish we had played more...
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Review by Past Member 'rupali'
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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W8It is indeed an outstanding poem which tells about the truth of our lives. Our life is a war and our deeds are battlefield. To achieve the bigger goal, we often ignore those God-gifted blisses in the way of our lives for the sake of our target.
We start our journey from birth, but we do not know how and when to stop. So, at the old age, we repent for ignoring those blissful moments. But, time is very cruel. We can not get back those. We have nothing to do except regret. This is the story of almost every life. Only a few can utilise the times appropriately.
The poet is drawing the real picture of our life. Excellent performance. I hope your creativity will entertain us forever.

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