Hi, strlcuckoo ,

I found this beautiful poem at your own request and I am glad I did.

What a sweet, simple but eloquent verse, I really loved it. Reading, or speaking out loud reveals the uniqueness of this poem. It has a warm flow, a good pace and an intimate nature.

An ode at the brown eyes of your love, what is there not to like!

4 stanzas and each one of them tells a strong tail. I personally find the second stanza very powerful: There are beautiful/ Beautiful blue eyes/ But those that are brown/ Make my heart rate rise

There are a few things I want you to look at:

* There are beautiful; consider They are beautiful (second stanza)
* My heart; consider my heart (fourth stanza)
* So long as I live; consider As long as I live (fourth stanza)

Really, a very sympathetic love poem, thank you for sharing.

Keep on writing,

WakeUpAndLive~doingNaNo'24

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