To Clean the World [ASR] Women, boundaries, and beyond all that |
A WDC Power Review Hi Joy . I'm JACE , and I have the honor of reading and reviewing your offering "To Clean the World" . I invite your attention to the comments below. Please bear in mind these notes are from one on the outside looking in; ultimately only you can decide what's right for your story. Overall Impression. I have a hard time reviewing free form poetry--perhaps I just need structure in my life. But I have to say, your offering was powerful for me, full of emotion and intensity. Though you wrote this almost 20 years ago, I found it quite relevant today. Your opening set the stage with a unique look at how one should view the earth. Schools don't teach such a view. History is fraught with interactions between peoples over borders, real or imagined. Each person who reads your offering will obviously project their own experience on it. I did. Technical and Editorial Considerations. In this section I normally list those areas that relate specifically to the mechanics of your writing--punctuation, grammar, spelling, etc. Nothing to report on here. Well done. My Rating. 5.0. Thank you for sharing this offering. Please accept these comments as offered in friendship and support. They are but my humble opinion. Reviewed by JACE ** Image ID #1386062 Unavailable ** My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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