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Given: Dec 27, 2023 at 3:56pm
Length: 626 Characters |
623 w/o WritingML
Excellent poem, Spiritual Dawning.
You have a consistent A-A rhyme scheme for these couplet verses.
The message is true to the season. People, like me, who love Christmas tend to feel sad and misty when the day has recently passed. That's me "to a tea." However, you have displayed hope to help us pass through the sadness into a new year of possibilities.
"The wishing well" seems to contain the double meaning of "Sadness is now, but we are wishing you well in the future."
This is such an encouraging thought as an antidote for the feelings I am experiencing right now.
Blessings Always.
Jay
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