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| (4.0)| An Angel Army Review Hi TheactualTreasure  . Hello. I found your offering in the Read & Review section.I'm JACE , and I have the honor of reading and reviewing your offering "Invalid Item" . I invite your attention to the comments below. Please bear in mind these notes are from one on the outside looking in; ultimately only you can decide what's right for your story.  Overall Impression. I can see the wisdom of advertising one's work. I did wonder about why it was so important to provide advance notice of a single poem. It seems more realistic in providing notice for something larger or more inclusive, like a poetry chapbook.At one point you do actually state the release date ... and that's good. But in your first paragraph you use the phrase "three weeks and six days," which will only be accurate on the first date of article publication. All that said, there little doubt as to the importance of your pending release. I wish you lots of luck in this writing endeavor.  Technical and Editorial Considerations. In this section I normally list those areas that relate specifically to the mechanics of your writing--punctuation, grammar, spelling, etc. I'm not sure why you added the word "unreleased" to your title. I think it's not needed.  My Rating. 4.0.  Thank you for sharing this offering. Please accept these comments as offered in friendship and support. They are but my humble opinion.Reviewed by JACE    My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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You responded to this review 01/15/2024 @ 4:21pm EST