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For Her Open in new Window. [E]
1/08 There's a dreamgirl out there somewhere.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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#1188309 by iKïyå§ama Author IconMail Icon


Hallo! This one showed up on 'read and review'. The title, brief description and genres work perfectly. Maybe you'd like to add a cover picture.

I enjoyed the poem. While the theme is universal, your approach to it has a unique touch. The feelings are completely relatable and the tone is just right for the emotions expressed.

The line about your heart wrapped in her sleeve brought a smile! *Smile*

My only suggestion would be for WritingML - font, size, line space and center. Maybe italics.

Write On!
Love this one

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