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Hallo!
This one showed up on 'Read and Review' and I'm glad it did.

The title and brief description work well. You may want to pick a couple more genres, to give the poem more exposure on site.

For the layout, maybe you'd like to try some WritingML, like font, size, center.

The poem itself is very powerful and will resonate with many readers. You have some great imagery and emotions, and I like the contrast brought out in the responses to the voices - 'chasing' or 'hiding from', and 'whispers' or 'nightmares'. That's brilliant!

Suggestion:
In the first verse, you repeat the word 'night'.
You might want to change one of those.

Thanks for sharing this!
Write On!
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