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It's the End of the World as We Know It  Open in new Window. [E]
2 brothers, living in a world of darkness
by Genipher Author Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi, Genipher Author IconMail Icon, I am Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "It's the End of the World as We Know It Open in new Window., because I discovered it on the "I Write in 2024Open in new Window. forum page.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with nothing outside the darkness. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The climax is my favorite part of the story. I like this part because it was a happy ending.

Final thoughts: The first person point of view and voice were good choices for this story, because they revealed the speaker's personality.

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