Greetings,

I couldn’t resist checking out one of your mystery stories.

This is a clever and amusing spin on the provided prompt. I appreciate how you made sure to gather up all the context surrounding the story’s creation, as well as providing a word count and even listing all the newsletters it’s been featured in (gee, I need to do that with my stories!)

My only question about the logic of the story would be, how did Todd manage to go all over town burying human bones and no one noticed until his dog dug them up? I would think people would notice when portions of their land had been disturbed. Also, I very much doubt that there would be any fingerprints left on the bullet found in the skull. And at some point Marty would have been reported missing.

Criticism aside, this was a quick and enjoyable read.

Thanks for sharing, take care and keep writing


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