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 Silent Neighborhood Open in new Window. [18+]
You are shrunk in your neighborhood, can you survive?
by 808today Author Icon
Review by KingsSideCastle Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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This interactive offers some intense ways to go. Usually the Vore genre sticks to humans but this story takes it up a notch introducing the fate of getting devoured by animals into the mix. At the time of this review this story was already coming along really well with close to 200 chapters set up. It gives a wide range of vore scenarios with with a lot of great location and characters it could happen with. As a GTS fan, my favorite chapters are the human devourer ones such as the opening college arc and one with Elizabeth I really appreciate the range and depth though. I think one thing that you could do to help the story develop provide some slow builds. A lot of the chapters written are very short. The characters don't need to find themselves about to be eaten immediately. You might have them start off their days normally and go about their lives before finding themselves in the unfortunate situation. There are a lot of options for how they might get like that i.e. transformation and shrinking but it is good to expand on them. In any case kudos on a good interactive!

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