Greetings and happy account anniversary!

A simple and childlike narrative poem, written with a light heart and good humor. We see the narrator taking care of their landlord's chickens and being nice about it.

I enjoyed the repetition of the line "I’m in charge of the chickens;" it gives it a song like quality. Your presentation is excellent, with centered bold text, and the cheerful words flow across the screen quite well.

I don't usually have much to criticize about poetry because I'm not an expert on metric forms. I can recognize a good one mostly by instinct.

Thanks for sharing, take care and keep writing


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