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How To: Portfolio [Manage Items]  [E] Your made-easy guide on how to manage items in your portfolio.  |
| (4.5)| An Angel Army Review Hi GERVIC . I'm JACE , and I have the honor of reading and reviewing your offering "How To: Portfolio [Manage Items]" as submitted to "WDC L'il Helper Contest" . I invite your attention to the comments below. Please bear in mind these notes are from one on the outside looking in; ultimately only you can decide what's right for your story.  Overall Impression. Thank you for taking time to prepare a submission to my contest. "Writing.Com 101" is a fabulous Reference Guide for all WDC members. But, like tax publications, there is always some small aspect that needs further explanation. That's the premise for "The File Cabinet" (FC). I seek short, specific How-To items that explain the significance of a small part of the larger picture.Your chosen topic, How To - Portfolio [Manage Items], is a valid topic for the FC. But I found it daunting to follow and not easy to navigate as written. And I'm a member who has used this feature before. I wonder how a new member might fare. A few suggestions follow: Your opening is good--you focus on Manage Items, which is a great subject. I like your use of color to help identify particular aspects of the text. But it's a complicated topic to follow. Clicking on the gear icon beside the Portfolio heading will expand, not collapse, into several sub-headers. Also, mention that an error message will be displayed when an action is unable to be completed. The error must be fixed before you can continue. I do know what I'm suggesting here, and the complexity for its success. Perhaps each sub-topic should be a stand-alone entry in which every potential situation can be explained. Obviously this is a suggestion. Please let me know if you're unable to separate this item, or if you decide to delete the item.  Technical and Editorial Considerations. In this section I normally list those areas that relate specifically to the mechanics of your writing--punctuation, grammar, spelling, etc. I noted one spelling error. [Reoder] Should be: [Reorder] My Rating. 4.5.  Thank you for sharing this offering. Please accept these comments as offered in friendship and support. They are but my humble opinion.Reviewed by JACE   My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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