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 DEPRESSIVE INSANITY Open in new Window. [E]
An introspective look at Depression and its effects on the mind.
by Christopher Day Author Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Greetings and welcome to writing.com!

You have offered us a splendid glimpse into the stormy depths of your pained psyche. I love how at first I almost didn't realize it rhymes; the long lines feel like free verse, but the rhyming is like the cherry on top, bringing balance and structure to the chaotic moodiness. It's amazing that you were able to say exactly what you needed to say with tidy end rhymes that don't feel trite at all.

I need to remind myself as much as anyone, that on WdC, posting line counts and word counts is a highly recommended habit to develop, so that when you enter contests the last thing you have to worry about is forgetting to add the number of lines/words.

I see you've picked three relevant genres, which was probably already explained by others. It gives you more visibility when browsing and also offers more chances to be nominated for a Quill Award.

I also have made a habit of recommending using size 4 Verdana font to ensure readability across devices.

I enjoyed reading this poem, as much as one can enjoy a foray into someone else's unhappiness. I identify with it myself, especially this time of year. It reminds me of the struggles Imagine Dragons lead singer Dan Reynolds goes through... Have you ever listened to their song Dull Knives?

Thanks for sharing, take care and keep writing *Smile* *Heartb*


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