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Rated: E | (5.0)
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It is a very exciting chapter. The writer mixes drama very well in it. That makes it more interesting. It has a very fast pace, too.
Yes, the central character is none other than Articus. He shows his class and saves Celia and Nina from a possible danger. The author superbly draws the scenes.
It is a splendid effort. I hope that the incoming chapters will also be thrilling and action-oriented like this one.

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