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 | An Immaculate House Isn't My Style  [E] How to clean your house when you hate to clean your house.  |
| (4.5)| An Angel Army Review Hi Kathleen Cochran . I'm JACE , and I have the honor of reading and reviewing your offering "An Immaculate House Isn't My Style" , which I found on the Read& Review feature. I invite your attention to the comments below. Please bear in mind these notes are from one on the outside looking in; ultimately only you can decide what's right for your story.  Overall Impression. Your title intrigued me; I had to read your offering. What might cause someone to utter those words?You mention doing the same tasks repeatedly reminds me of that saying: Insanity is doing the same thing, over and over again, but expecting different results. Being a list-maker, I like that you itemized your "attempt to clean" tasks. I especially identify with #2--making the bed in our house is often the only thing done daily in the bedroom. I suspect everyone who reads this offering resonates with your list. Perhaps your final bit of advice is why I now have to assemble the portable greenhouse that my wife just bought.  Technical and Editorial Considerations. In this section I normally list those areas that relate specifically to the mechanics of your writing--punctuation, grammar, spelling, etc. I noted no issue with the actual writing mechanics. However, your choice of font and the larger size WITHOUT a corresponding line spacing change made your offering very hard for me to read. I'd recommend an increased line spacing. The double spacing of the paragraphs was perfect.  Favorite Part. My wife does pay a housekeeper and she and I are of two minds on this following subject: I wouldn't pick up (that's why the housekeeper is coming); my wife makes me.  For one thing, my husband and children would actually pick up their stuff if they knew the housekeeper was coming the next day.  My Rating. 4.5.  Thank you for sharing this offering. Please accept these comments as offered in friendship and support. They are but my humble opinion.Reviewed by JACE   My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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You responded to this review 02/19/2024 @ 3:38pm EST