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 Trouble with family Open in new Window. [18+]
Strange things begin to happen to you around your family. Please add.
by Irish Spartan Author Icon
Review by KingsSideCastle Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Great interactive. This is well developed with multiple storylines written out. I like how it is divided up using different rooms for all the character / family members. The characters are set up nicely. There are some really wild ideas in this story that are explored really well. The arcs I read in this focus on hypnosis, feminization and transformation of the lead (reader). There are over 400 chapters in this story (at the time of this review and not just choice chapters so it is moving along really nicely. I read through a few of the arcs like the opening one with the main characters mother, the arc following his sister Jane, and an arc where his teacher was dominating him. It is contributed by multiple authors and they seem to be well written out. It is coming along really nicely and is well maintained. Excellent work on it!

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