First Impression: The first stanza establishes the form, mood, and theme of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the narrative and laughter forward at a good pace.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems.
I like: The second verse is my favorite because the questions made me laugh.
Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this funny poem because it made me laugh.
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