First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with Joe taking Zoe with him. The conversation and interaction among the characters moved the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems.
I like: My favorite part is the lesson this story taught. I like that part because it emphasized supporting your friends.
Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the lesson it taught.
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