Good poem. Great title. The outdoors can be a cool source of inspiration. It gives some great visual imagery. I love the description of the grass as telling a tale of those who walked upon it. The last 4 lines provide an interesting perspective. I particularly loved the last two lines describing the Cabin as a contract between men and nature. You naturally think of the contrast but instead it provides a union between them. On a technical level this poem has a nice rhythm to it. It reads pretty smoothly. I liked reading this.




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