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 Review #4736013 |
 | Thank You Writing.Com  [E] Expressing my thanks to my "writing" world.  |
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Hallo! I enjoyed this heartfelt tribute to our online home, and could relate to it! You express what most of the members feel. The title, brief description and genres work. I like the layout of the page and your pic on top!  That makes it very personal.Suggestions: 1. You begin with a defensive, or justifying stance. Maybe you could put the gratitude part first and the response to change later ... ? 2. I'd like to have seen more specific aspects of how WDC helped you, some examples. 3. You wrote this a while ago. Maybe an update on how you feel now, especially about writing? 4. Minor typo - Knowing your here (you mean you're). Thanks for sharing this tribute! Write On Sonali  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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