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Into the Wild Black Yonder Open in new Window. [13+]
An imaginary excursion inside a black hole's event horizon.
by Davy Kraken Author Icon
Review by Jeff Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hello Davy Kraken

Congratulations on your Writing.com account anniversary this month! I'm sending this review in honor of the occasion, courtesy of the "Anniversary ReviewsOpen in new Window. activity.


*Penw* Positives

I thought this was a fantastic poem. I love the subject matter, and the language was both sophisticated and evocative which matched my expectations for what a poem about black holes would read like. I also absolutely loved the fact that you increased the kerning and stretched out the word "spaghettified" so that the word itself became an embodiment of the concept. That was a really smart way to add some variety and uniqueness to the poem. Well done!


*Penw* Suggestions

I don't have any suggestions for improvement. And based on the fact that this piece apparently won first place (and a trophy!) for the contest in which it was entered, it sounds like I'm not alone in thinking it's great just the way it is! *Bigsmile*


*Penw* Overall

This was an excellent poem about a really interesting topic. Well done!


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