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 | Light  [13+] For Writer's Cramp 3.26 - a Mirrored Cinquain about light.  |
| (5.0)  My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. THE POEMA poem about light, the power of it's reflection, and that special something that hovers just above the light.  WHAT I LIKEDI enjoyed the word play; it deepened the expression of the poem and made me think of different angles of interpretation.  STRUCTUREThis is a cinquain poem. This a 5 line stanza poem. The lines are 2, 4. 6, 8 and 2 syllables. MECHANICSI did not spot any spelling mistakes. The poem is easy to read. DESCRIPTIONSI liked: "light is dancing" -- light is electric, vibrant, and alive. Light gives life. PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONSI loved the flow of the poem and the invitation to give light your own interpretation. Was it a lover basking in the light of lovemaking or simply the early morning twilight breaking out the positivity in one's soul? I enjoyed this poem very much!    HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM"Anniversary Reviews"  
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You responded to this review 03/13/2024 @ 3:42pm EDT