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 Storm Music Open in new Window. [E]
sometimes the music changes, or how we hear it, does.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.

*Reading* THE POEM

The poem tells a story through weather and storms that mirror the highs and lows of our own life.

*Idea* WHAT I LIKED

I loved the word play; it deepened the expression of the poem. I felt like I went a journey and discovered my own weathered traveled life.

*Star* STRUCTURE

This is free form poem. There was no set rythme scheme.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. The poem is easy to read.

*Star* DESCRIPTIONS

I liked: "Rainbows ribboned across sunlit skies" Great visual with succinct wording.

*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

I have no suggestions for improvement. The title fits the poem well. A great read that challenges the reader to take time and reflect, leaving one on a positive note.

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