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 What Now Open in new Window. [E]
A free-form poem for image prompt - Express It In Eight
by MJones I Survived Another Year Author Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi MJones I Survived Another Year Author Icon.

I'm JACE Author Icon, and I have the honor of reading and reviewing your offering "What Now" Open in new Window., which I found on the Read & Review featture.

I invite your attention to the comments below. Please bear in mind these notes are from one on the outside looking in; ultimately only you can decide what's right for your story.

*Note1* Overall Impression. I'm primarily a short story and essay writer. I dabble in writing poetry and have dipped my toe in the waters of reviewing poetry. I love trying out new forms.

Honestly, I chose to review your offering because I didn't understand the form you used. I was intrigued ... and then I realized that the numbers you included (3.16.2024) were NOT part of the prompt; they were the date you wrote your poem.

May I suggest you delete those numbers while citing the prompt? It IS distracting since you posted that in two separate places.

As for your poem--I found you followed the Topic listed very well. It happens to mirror perfectly the actions of a newly-born calf. (I happened to watch the movie City Slickers last night for context of my thought.) What now, indeed?

*Exclaim* Technical and Editorial Considerations. In this section I normally list those areas that relate specifically to the mechanics of your writing--punctuation, grammar, spelling, etc.

         *Bullet* No issues noted in this section. I tend to leave punctuation in poetry to the authors devices.    

*Star* My Rating.  4.5. 

*Heart* Thank you for sharing this offering. Please accept these comments as offered in friendship and support. They are but my humble opinion.


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