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Review by Rhyssa Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Just passing through on my own mad wander through "WonderlandOpen in new Window.--and I'm enjoying my read through yours.

I have been enjoying the glimpses of your life--I think my favorite so far was the children building huts only to have their sleep be rained out. That is just such a kid thing to do--I remember doing such things in my own life. I also enjoyed the knitting bits--I knit a lot, so I can recognize the stitches that disappear or multiply without notice. All I can say is that you'd probably been practicing some technique that you hadn't learned yet, and that's why your counts were off. I'm just glad you had fun.

I also enjoyed your poetry. The clock poem was delightful--it made me laugh. And I really enjoyed the mirrored poem (which is as far as I've read so far because that's as far as I've gotten on my own journey and I don't like reading ahead). The kinds of opposites that you used reminded me of my own mirrored poem.

It's wonderful seeing how we've all come up with such different things from the same beginnings. Good luck as you continue on your journey.
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