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 haiku (a fawns day) Open in new Window. [E]
A 5-7-5 haiku
by jamisonbrown Author Icon
Review by Past Member 'ashok25'
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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It's a traditional Japanese Haiku. It follows the syllable rules accurately. The image of a Winter day of nature has been drawn perfectly and lively, too. It is a three-lined unrhymed portry. The selection of words is awesome.
It is a tough but lovely art.
Write on.



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