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 Bear Open in new Window. [E]
The life of bears in nature
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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This appears to be a piece in progress. It suffers from a few places where thoughts haven't been completed, or divided from one another. I think that this would be better served with separate paragraphs describing each individual type of bear. Also I am not sure that American black bears eat bamboo, which is how the sentence currently reads. This has the potential to be an informative and interesting article. Thank you for presenting this for us to read please continue to work on it and send me a link to the completed article so I can re review it. If you need help with linking items or reopening items you already began check out "Noticing NewbiesOpen in new Window. for assistance.

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