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 Eyes of Mist Open in new Window. [13+]
Ayala never had any doubts that the Shakaree were evil. But then she met one of them.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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I like the beginning with the soldiers seeking the fate of the unbreakable fortress. The way they are picked off in the mists is kind of creepy it makes me wonder what kind of Uber warriors the invaders were when the thoughts of the scout is that it seemed strange that they were capable of taking out the fortification. The two sides seem to know little except a just because hate of the other. Does anyone really remember why this war began? What about the mysterious writer in the white land. Is he writing what has happened or what will happen?

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