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Take A Breath Open in new Window. [E]
A brief bit of advice for someone who encouraged me to post this.
by Louis Williams Author Icon
Review of Take A Breath  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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This is an awesome poem with a strong positive message. It is short with few words but is a mountain of inspiration. The simple instructions on breathing end up bringing the reader to a place of empowerment. It is an open call to improve your situation that makes no restrictions on gender, race, religion, age or political affiliations. It is just a good poem placed in the world to do good for all who meet it. The title is deceptively simply as are the instructions but it is something best shared with others.
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