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Positives
I really enjoyed this short story. Flash fiction of only a few hundred words is really difficult to do well, and you managed to describe a vivid scene well in that amount of space.
Suggestions
No suggestions come to mind.
Overall
Overall, I thought you did a good job with this piece, particularly with your detail and description. Well done!
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