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I Write - Decade Edition - Roaring 20's Open in new Window. [E]
Poems and prose for various contests over the course of the decade.
by 💙 Carly-wrimo 2024 Author Icon
         Review for entry/chapter: "Living Mindfully Open in new Window.
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello, Carly!

Happy Writing.Com Anniversary month! This mindful poem of yours was in the post before mine in "I Write in 2024," so I'm here to do your review. I hope you enjoy it and find it encouraging and uplifting.




INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:
*Bulletg* I loved your mindful poem! Well done! *Clap*

*Bulletg* You kept me riveted and I read straight through to the end. Great way to catch my attention, keep it and make me want to read more posts too. Well done! *Clap*



MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:

*Bulleto* My favorite line of your mindful poem was: "And slip into mindful breeze." It made me smile and want to slip into my own mindful breeze. Well done! *Clap*

*Bulleto* You made great use of rhyming and it contributed to the fun and relaxed feeling of your mindful poem. Well done! *Clap*

*Bulleto* You did a great job keeping your poem to eight lines for "Express it in Eight," and making those eight lines count. Well done! *Clap*

*Bulleto* I thought the ending was perfect. Motivational yet still within the mindfulness theme of your poem. Well done! *Clap*

*Bulleto* I didn't notice any spelling or grammatical mistakes (or mistakes of any kind) in your mindful poem. Well done! *Clap*



IDEAS TO MAKE YOUR PIECE STRONGER:
I would love to have something great to share here, but I think it's nice as it is. Well done! *Clap*





CONCLUSION:
*Bulletv* You have a great writing style and sense of mindfulness and I enjoy reading your poetry. Well done! *Clap*

*Bulletv* Thank you for sharing your time, community spirit, mindful mindset, and writing with the Writing.Com community!

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance!
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