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Given: Mar 28, 2024 at 8:22pm
Length: 559 Characters |
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Poor Smokey he was a bonified hero and then lost the two cats he loved the most. I hope his second life is a good one. One thing, you talked about the Kennedy assasinaton and then shortly after that the girl's kidnapping.at the kidnappers house Christine mentioned leaving her cell phone at home. The time frame for that isn't right. She couldn't have had a cellphone. You also might want to double check that 911 had been created by that point. It didn't always exist. That is the trouble with historical fiction, you have to make sure to avoid anachronisms.
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