Hi Lilliy Loidd -

This is a GoT (Game of Thrones) review.

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The reason I chose this particular story/poem: I chose this story because the title and description caught my attention.

My opinion of said story/poem: I'm not sure I understood the story, in my mind it could be saying either: 1. This Father and the church are actually in heaven and the people in the pods are praying back on earth or 2. This is some science fiction realm where the people actually do live in/or travel in pods. I'm gonna go with number 1 as the most likely (don't be too upset if I totally missed the mark!) and say that I enjoyed the imaginary scenario and its many possibilities.

All in all, I enjoyed the premise (#1) but the story could use some fleshing out, now that any word count limitations should be done, to better explain the plot. Even just a short explanation as to why the people are in the pods would go a long way in the reader's understanding of the story.

Conclusion: As I said above, I enjoyed the possibilities of the story but I definitely need more information to fully understand the story. Your imagery is great, I can see all that is happening in all its bright colors. I also appreciated the fact that you made Michael angry, a drunk, and still a believer. You gave him complicated human emotions, well done.

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina




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