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Rated: E | (4.5)
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GAMES OF THRONES POEM REVIEW

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*Reading* THE POEM

A divine look at nature from it's simplest, humblest vantage point, to the deep pondering mystery of what nature offers the soul.

*Idea* WHAT I LIKED

The poem challenges a reader's critical thinking - giving them the opportunity to see the physical nature nature around them, then challenges the reader to go deeper - what or who brings us the beauty of nature that soothes the soul?

*Star* STRUCTURE

This is a free form poem with no set rythme scheme.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. The poem is easy to read. I might suggest using WDC ML to make the font bigger so it is easier to read on WDC.

*Star* DESCRIPTIONS

I liked: "Among the stars, a trailing beck," I can close my eyes and visualize a blazing trail of fire, like a comet, visiting each star.

*Star* SETTING

I could picture myself standing on the roof of a tall building and looking out into the night pondering the world around me.

*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

Suggestion as mentioned above. The poem invites a visual full of nature, yet taps into the power of the spiritual to make a poignant connection to the reader.

Reviewed by StephB for House Targaryen

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