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The Iron Bank of Braavos  (13+) For G.o.T. Activity #1994693 by Gaby

A Review from The Iron Bank Of Braavos

Hi: I am Megan. I am one of the sly foxes.

Title: Lucky

First Impression:
I like items that have a mystery about them. I get suspicious of Friday the 13th. So, this is was asking me to come in and read. The black cat picture said Hello and I was willing to read and review this.

What needs your attention:
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What part I liked best:
The black kitty. Black cats don't bring bad luck. The dialogue tells the story and holds the reader's interest. Lucky, the cat bought good luck. This makes you smile. It made me smile. The characters seem to interact well and they play out well in the story. Everything irons out and makes for a good story.

Overall Impression:
Nick seems to be bad tempered and looks like he will be living in his car. He had a friend in Nancy. A kitty cat ended up in Nancy's car and she is sure how it got there. Looks like she needs a friend. A good style and I enjoy a story with animals in it and I like when the animal gets a happy ending. As for Nancy's friend Nick. Hopefully, he will, too. the characters are well structured. Nancy, I could be friends with. Nick, I don't know. Creative and colorful. Looks like you spent time with this. Maybe opening umbrellas in the house doesn't bring bad luck. Ladders. Walking under a ladder doesn't bring bad lucks. This story puts a person's fears to rest. Well defined story and I enjoyed reading this.

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