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The Iron Bank of Braavos  (13+) For G.o.T. Activity #1994693 by Gaby

A Review From The Iron House Of Braavos

Hi Scarlet

Welcome To WDC

My name is Megan. I am one of the sly foxes.

First Impression: I am a hopeless romantic so I was drawn to this item. Falling in love. It comes with fears, hopes and anxieties. You expressed them well here. Maya Angelou impresses you and she does me as well. Another reason I decided to read and review this. You took time to express your views and romance. Good call.

What needs your attention: I was hoping these would be numbered about counting the ways you love this person. You say you are falling in love with him. What exact moment or what did he say or do to make you realize hey, you really love this person without a doubt. How does he feel about you?

What part I liked best: Closing your eyes when being kissed. Hearing old familiar things in new ways because you are with someone you love. Making a promise to face all possibilities and love sets us free.

Overall Impression: You feel that when it comes to love that you got this. You expressed the reasons why you love this person. This poem doesn't rhyme but it doesn't need to. Well structured, well rounded words get your thoughts on paper. The love is there. A good style and nice reflections. Easy to follow. I enjoyed reading this. A delightful, beautiful love prose.











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